1) I think you should remove the last two sentences of the paragraph
2) If you don't hurry in completing your homework, you'll do a better job.
3) How are succeding in your new job ?
4 ) i don't like to go to the movies alone
5 ) Do you have a moment to try to find the keys with me ?
6 ) The child said that she didn't break the window deliberately.
7 ) Did you go on a date with your new girlfriend again today ?
8 ) It's cold outside , you'd better place a sweater on yourself
9 ) Fortunately, Marie is associating well with her new co-workers.
10 ) Don't sit on the dirty ground like that, rise right now !'